Tuesday, September 18, 2012
Intro #2 of Cause Essay
She
always knew exactly what I was saying to her. I could tell her to do something,
just about anything, and she knew what I meant. That dog was incredibly smart! She
went everywhere with me. She was my pal – my friend. German shepherds have
always been my favorite breed of dog. That is why I have owned so many. Each
and every one of them had just about the same traits. They are traits that are
very important to me for a dog to possess. Protectiveness, smarts, and loyalty:
it’s what separates the good dogs from the bad.
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The second half of this might fit into a revised-again first graf, and the beginning might work as part of the outro, but, overall, I think you have a keeper intro with the revised #1.
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