Intro #2 of Contrast Essay
Me,
myself, and I. Three people you would never expect to share the same body. They
have all had a part in the way I looked at life. I have dramatically changed
over the years. With each growing
experience and the meeting of newer people, I have had different views on life.
Each year, I grew up, matured, and realized what was important and not so
important in life. Then finally, I became who I proudly am today: Mrs. Jessica
Germaine Ricker.
So this is JGR then vs JGR now? The three people at the start throw me off a little, so I'd say that's a weak hook.
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