Thursday, October 11, 2012
Intro #1 of Contrast Essay
Me,
myself, and I; all the same person, yet three different people. My whole life I
have dramatically changed from one person to another. All the experiences and
people in my life have influenced my stance on life at one point or another. Over
the past five years, I have had completely different personalities and viewpoints
on each and every topic. Some people would think I am a completely different
person. However, I know that I, now, am a better person than my past selves, me
and myself.
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I'd say this me, myself, and I is even more confusing here than in the second intro.
ReplyDeleteWhy not give us a teaser, a preview, a taste of those differences? Show us a bit of them in this first graf instead of simply saying they exist.
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