Monday, September 17, 2012
Graf #13 (Reaction)
When I
opened up the link to read the cause essays the first time, I read all the
wrong ones because I wasn’t paying attention to the headings. Stupid, I know.
The second time around, I got it straight. Now, I have a better understanding
of what a cause essay is all about. I really liked the first one about
dishonesty, fear, and selfishness when it came to love. I think she nailed that
topic. I think a lot of women could relate to that. Her essay kept me reading
on. The ballerina one was cute. I think a lot of little kids look up to someone
older than them and try to be just like them. I think I am still going to keep
my topic that I chose for my cause essay. Even though I did not do it right the
first time, I am going to revise it to make it work.
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Whoops--you ran the 'stop' sign and read too far! There are only four cause essays; then there are other types we'll be working on later. So, go back and take a second look at the four cause essays.... Your cause essay should give three reasons for X, yes.
ReplyDeleteAlright, I rewrote it. Actually paid attention to the headings this time! Haha.
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